No one cares

Poem by: Lobelia89

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this just hit me one day this was one of my frist poems so i thought sounds good

I have no heart beat

I have no breath

I cut myself I have no blood

I look in the mirror nothing there

I'm yelling at the top of my lungs

No one look

No one hears

O Wait I'm dead

Do they miss me

Do they care

O well who cares I'm dead

Submitted: December 10, 2008

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JRD Wrighter

well that's dark...

Wed, December 10th, 2008 7:00pm

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thanks, i tryed.;)

my bff rights lost's of dark poem's. you should check her out her name is sound of madness

Thu, December 11th, 2008 1:35am

REDWOLF

BEAUTIFUL!!! THIS IS MY KIND OF POEM^_^

Tue, December 23rd, 2008 10:01pm

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glad you like it. it was like my frist poem i didne know were it was going till i was down. and i was like hmmmm not bad.

thanks for the comment i like to know what people think of my stuff

:)

Wed, December 24th, 2008 12:13am

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