Hello, it's me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

It's a very short poem, please have a read and let me know what you think of it.


Submitted: April 13, 2012

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brucek

i love it! what a roller coaster! and what a jerk! you deserve someone better. such a passionate, burning piece. good job!

Tue, April 17th, 2012 3:05pm

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Awh, thank you. :)

Tue, April 17th, 2012 8:16am

Brian W

Such a powerful poem...Straight from your heart...Beautifully written.....But you need to be loved for who you are NOT change to get someones love..

Thu, May 10th, 2012 11:32pm

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Thank you

Fri, May 11th, 2012 7:50am

Brian W

At the beginning I was going to mention about it NOT being a short poem but I forgot about that once I had read it...Again a great poem

Thu, May 10th, 2012 11:34pm

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Haha, thank you. :)

Fri, May 11th, 2012 7:50am

Wyld Astradine

just like me. im better off without him, but i cant live without him. ive moved on, but if he wanted me back id give him 1 last chance. just one. if i saw 1 slip up, then goodbye.
its beautiful.

Fri, May 18th, 2012 9:35pm

MenInBlack

Very nice work, emotions can be very turbulent when your in love... Keep up the awesome work :D

Sun, June 17th, 2012 3:29pm

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Thank you. :)

Sun, June 17th, 2012 2:31pm

LupusSteppe

Hoping there is a healthy dose of sarcasm in some of the lines. Either that or that you are feeling better and able to move on from this.

Thu, June 21st, 2012 7:39am

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