Poem by: Lona333
Submitted: February 21, 2013
I see everything, but yet I see nothing.
I see light, but I only see darkness.
I look up, but yet I look down.
I feel joy, but it is only depression.
I live, but I have already died.
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Such strong emotion, well done
IMAD UL ISLAM
Wow.. Briliant stuff.. You write unique and different poems.. Short but very powerful... Yet we have to move forward hiding all those painful moments but sometimes it may be very hard.. Life is a paradox.. You are a great poetess :)
Thank you so much!! I just write how I feel, I don't really have to think about things, they just come.
all your poems are shorts but powerful i enjoy reading them
I'm glad you enjoy them!
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