Poem by: Lona333
Submitted: March 22, 2013
Snow falls to the ground
The brilliant white color just
falls slowly down, down....
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This very pretty. I like haiku very much. It's very simplistic and only makes room for a writer to say the vitals and not add detail. Very beautiful :) Keep up the good work!
Very good haiku. Nature at its best.
Nature is my escape form the real world. It is amazing. And thank you for the comment.
captures the colour and movement, very visual, good writing
nice lines. it makes me think...
Thank you for commenting.
Brilliant haiku! I loved it. I may even have to write one sometime, lol. Though not to pick, but I believe haiku format is 5, 7, 5. So maybe it should be: the brilliant white color just. Unless I missed a syllable somewhere, lol. Keep up the good work. Keep em comin. :o)
Thank you, I do believe you are right. I meant to put just in there, but it seems I forgot.
Yay i love hiakus. (bad spelling) its fine getting them to be 5 7 5 but getting them to make sense is harder!
I'm glad you like haikus. They, most often times, have very important meanings in them.
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