Short Story Pain Topic Results

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic
This is the results for my short story pain topic contest. Enjoy!

Submitted: July 07, 2014

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Submitted: July 07, 2014

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Short Story Pain Topic Scoring Results

 

1st Place: Ikky2000

 

Story: The Excruciating Lie

 

What I thought About It: It was brilliant, and so full of that powerful meaning a short story Pain Topic. It was fantastically written clearly showing that it had a lot of thoughts and Ikky did not rush through this piece of amazing work. I am so proud, and honored to read this story. It brought tears to my eyes, what with Zeke being such a jerk not even remembering her and everything she did, or thought about him. This is truly an amazing piece filled with pain and powerful emotion. This was fantastic and the moment I laid eyes on this I knew it was amazing. Excellent job!

 

 

2nd Place: KW156766

 

Story:  Never Cherished

 

What I thought about it:  I loved this; it was so filled with pain, and was a perfect example of the pain topic for the contest. I was nearly in tears during every sad part, which is why it is such a good story. If it makes you want to cry then it is great. Overall I think this was a well-written story and this amazing writer did a fantastic job with it.

 

 

3rd Place: Complicated Girl

 

Story: BitterSweet Remorse

 

What I thought about it: I thought this was a wonderful piece, filled with love, and lots of pain. Which is perfect for this contest, you’re an amazing writer and this is a strong piece, which you worked really hard on and it turned out to be amazing. Great Job!

 

 

4th Place: Fantasy 87 or TheRedQueen

 

Story: I Loved You by Fantasy 87, and Broken Promises by TheRedQueen

 

What I thought about it: It was okay but could use more detail; it was lacking the main emotional part for the story. But I did like the plot it was a good example of a pain filled topic. Now that you have fixed it is a lot better, filled with the pain and some of the important detail but it was still lacking the strong hold. But don’t take this into offense, by the time I reread it the contest was near over and I still had to read other stories. But overall I still thought it was amazing in every way possible!

 

Congratulations to everyone who has entered and won..... and thank you for everyone that has entered I enjoyed reading your stories. I hope you will enter and like the contests that are to come... I hope you will all enjoy the rest if my stories and I promise that I will answer everyone's reading requests as soon as possible, but I have recently got back from my super awesome trip so I was very busy! Enjoy!
~LoneStallion54

 

 


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