AS SLEEP TAKES ME I BEGIN TO DREAM ONLY TO BE AWAKEND BY THIE NOTHING IS AS IT SEEMS MY WORLD IS ALL TURNED AROUND MY LIFE IS UP SIDE DOWN AND I CANT WAKE UP FROM MY EVERLASTING NIGHTMARE
AS I TAKE MY FIRST STEPS HE COMES FROM BEHIND AND STARTS THE PREPS TO MAKE A REWIND TO TAKE ME BACK TO THE BEGINING ONLY TO FIND MYSELF AT THE ENDING ALL I WANT IS TO WAKE UP FROM MY EVER LASTING NIGHTMARE
AS I FIND MYSELF AT THE END OF THE WORLD HE LOOKS AT ME WITH JOY AS HE HURLS AT ME AND DESTROYS THE DECOY I WAKE UP AND LOOK AROUND ONLY THERE IS NOTHING TO BE FOUND AND THUS MY NIGHTMARE RESUMES AGAIN
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Help I Don't know How to get it in to a stanza format and get it to stay HELP ME OUT PLEASE HOW DO I DO THAT SO ITS NOT IN A PARAGRAPH FORMAT?!
I have the format problem alot. I really don't know how to fix it. I'm sorry I can't help:( But your poem is pretty good. We have this thing in common. I wrote some of my poems the exact same way, and ever since, I have my pencil and notepad write next to me on my bedstand. HAHA lol. This is great. Keep up the good work:P And if you would, please check out my stuff and comment. Thnx:P
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Thanks for telling me and I will look at your poems. and Its okay that you cant help some people are just going to have to get over the fact that its not right.
:) REally good! I used to have bad nightmares about one of my friends who I watched die, so I know the feeling. Keep it up! :)
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Oh man that sucks.. And I will.
wow i wish i could show this to my father and tell him to go fuck him self and im no longer gonna be afraid of him......but i cant:(
but i was great, amazing:D
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=) glad I give you hope some thing I don't have.
oh no no no!!! dont even dare start that ok you have enough hope ok, actually you know what that hope i have you gave it to me. you have enough for the whole freaking world. if you didnt why write all these poems? just to let it go? nonono! YOU HAVE HOPE! ya got that? kk so dont say you dont have hope or im cross the country and give you my hope personally to you(and pro. a slap for making me cross the country=Dlolz
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Oh your soooooooo funy!
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