People are fake

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Humor  |  House: Booksie Classic

This is my English sonnet. I got an "A" on it so I figured I should post it. Enjoy.

People are fake People can be liars People like that deserve to be slapped by a rake Because there are enough of those flyer's

People like that can't be trusted People like that lie in wait With a knife that's rusted People like that are waiting to seal your fate.

People like that are unworthy I cant be calling them my friends People like that are almost fight-worthy Our friendship can't be mended.

So this is me saying good bye to all the fakers And I am not afraid to use the rake.


Submitted: June 18, 2011

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Haley Renee

Use the Rake for what exactly :p. Unlike the person above me, I liked this sonnet or poem, which ever you prefer :). I completly agree with everything you wrote.

Tue, June 21st, 2011 1:50am

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Use the rake to hit them with haha and thanks

Mon, June 20th, 2011 8:03pm

AliCat216

Cynical...but good. For the format, if you're using Safari or Camino it won't stay as you had it, I'm not sure about Firefox, but it does work with Windows Internet Explorer. I had the same problem at first. Uh the first person was really brutal. I isn't lacking just about everything. This is how you feel? Then that's how it is, so he/she/it can stick it where the sun don't shine. Good Job. :)

Thu, July 28th, 2011 3:26pm

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haha thank you! and I got the problem fixed as you can tell from my newer work's. And that's not how i entirely feel I was just in a bad place when I wrote it..

Thu, July 28th, 2011 8:32am

GhostWalker

very good, hey do me a favor since your not afraid to use it hit my father with it a million times till he begs for you stop will you. c i would do it myself but im afraid:( great poem by the by:D

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 5:02am

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..... Well uh yeah.

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 3:28am

GhostWalker

haha:D wow that was really wierd and stupid of me to say:/ sry

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 4:05pm

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