So I am Spoiled am I?
Spoiled to the core?
Am I as rotten as a fly?
Not something you adore?
Well that's just to bad.
Sorry I was stuck with that fad.
You can say what you want but I don't care what you say, because I know whats true.
Submitted: July 02, 2011
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I could hear the beat in this one, I came up with a melody almost instantly! That's hard... :P Really really good! :)
Thu, July 28th, 2011 3:36pm
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thank you!
Thu, July 28th, 2011 8:37am
you keep blowing me away with all these poems they are fucking gooooooood:D i love this one so true
Tue, August 23rd, 2011 4:42am
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Thank you.
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Haley Renee
I love the last line, It's so true... well to me and lol obviously to you the poet who wrote it :p, as for the other part of the poem it is also wonderful, the lines just flowed, great work :)
Sun, July 3rd, 2011 12:48amAuthor
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Thank you:)
Sat, July 2nd, 2011 9:39pm