Rotten

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just some poetry enjoy.

So I am Spoiled am I?

Spoiled to the core?

Am I as rotten as a fly?

Not something you adore?

Well that's just to bad.

Sorry I was stuck with that fad.

You can say what you want but I don't care what you say, because I know whats true.


Submitted: July 02, 2011

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Haley Renee

I love the last line, It's so true... well to me and lol obviously to you the poet who wrote it :p, as for the other part of the poem it is also wonderful, the lines just flowed, great work :)

Sun, July 3rd, 2011 12:48am

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Thank you:)

Sat, July 2nd, 2011 9:39pm

AliCat216

I could hear the beat in this one, I came up with a melody almost instantly! That's hard... :P Really really good! :)

Thu, July 28th, 2011 3:36pm

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thank you!

Thu, July 28th, 2011 8:37am

GhostWalker

you keep blowing me away with all these poems they are fucking gooooooood:D i love this one so true

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 4:42am

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Thank you.

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 3:25am

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