Window Pane

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

It's just a Poem about someone who was close to you passing you by. And the memory of that person comes back and hurts you

Looking through the window pane . I see your silhouette walking past. Seeing you so close to me it makes my heart spark with pain. I remember when each moment with you was better than the last, But what we had is now lost. Now I only get your shoulders frost. We can't live in the lie that we've created. I can't believe I am saying this but... Good. Bye. Forever......


Submitted: June 15, 2011

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BriaTaylor

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Wed, June 15th, 2011 4:06am

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Thanks, Will do.

Thu, June 16th, 2011 7:32am

AliCat216

Keep up the good work :)

Thu, July 28th, 2011 3:21pm

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Thanks I will.

Thu, July 28th, 2011 8:25am

GhostWalker

amazing *tears*

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 5:06am

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=) Glad you like!

Tue, August 23rd, 2011 3:29am

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