I enjoy the life around me

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Someone who has let go of the past.

The sun  is my warmth,

The wind is my bliss,

My mind is separated,

from truth and logic,

I feel free of the world's pain,

I enjoy the life around me.

*

The tear stains on my cheeks,

are no more,

for the love and joy in my heart,

is all I need,

I enjoy the life around me.

*

The pain you have caused me,

will trouble my heart no more,

it still beats on,

no matter what,

I enjoy the life around me.

*

So what happened to me then,

will never happen again,

I just feel the sun on my skin,

the wind through my hair,

and enjoy the life around me.


Submitted: January 10, 2009

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Learning to fly

i love it

Sat, January 10th, 2009 11:52pm

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Thank you.

Sun, January 11th, 2009 8:34am

air

well yes its a nice carefree sort of poem.
a little denial in there but heck this chatacter is going to enjoy the moment none the less lol.

Sun, January 11th, 2009 1:21am

Author
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SO true...

Sun, January 11th, 2009 8:34am

Chiqui

Strong emotions here, just keep reaching for that star. Looking from the outside in lovely piece of work here. TC Chiqui

Sun, January 11th, 2009 4:48pm

Author
Reply

Thank ya. Nice poems on your page by the way :)

Tue, January 13th, 2009 7:04am

Pratibha

smooth flow and soothing...

Tue, January 13th, 2009 6:14am

Author
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thank ya

Tue, January 13th, 2009 2:24pm

maximilliano

There is always another love waiting out there. Maybe not the same as before but sometimes as good. Keep looking.

Thu, January 15th, 2009 5:17pm

Author
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What?? Oh, this isn't true ya know, I made it up on me own.

Fri, January 16th, 2009 2:33pm

Lost Sparrow

I LOVE it lol

Fri, January 16th, 2009 10:48pm

NovemberMarie

wow that is really good. I wish I could write that way.lol. soooooooooooooooo........

Sat, February 14th, 2009 12:02am

Author
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You write good too ya know

Sun, February 15th, 2009 5:17am

Only Mine

It has a good meaning and you can read between the lins which I personaly love. It sounds a lot like how it is being a christian and knowing that Love is always there and that as long as you have God you will never be without. For now and forever Only Mine.

Thu, March 19th, 2009 11:18pm

Author
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Well i didn't write it for that purpose, it's fact, it has nothing to do with your so called "god"

Fri, March 20th, 2009 2:52pm

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