The Truth Of Life.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Something I wrote while I was in New York!

It seems that the line won't move and people are falling apart.

Are we half way through?

Where again did we start?

Somehow this endless journey feels like life. 

Constantly moving...

With sorrow, pain, and strife.

Wishing you were back at home with people you miss.

Holding on to the thought of seeing him again.

The thought of a single kiss.

The minutes keep dragging by.

Haunting me with the sound...

Tick tock. Tick tock.

The stress closes in as a I look around.

Agin this feels like life because no matter how hard you try...

You can never cut someone in line.

Cause in life right now shortcuts don't exist.

You have to close in on opportunities...

Whether you make it or you miss.


Submitted: August 19, 2012

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MusingMuppet

This seems like my life right now. Are you spying on me? WTG can you check out some of my writing and give it a read and comment? Thanks.

Sun, August 19th, 2012 4:17pm

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I am not spying! Sorry:( Yes I will!-
love2loveyou

Sun, August 19th, 2012 9:22am

Wu Lang

Hi there love2loveyou...wow...i love your realization in this poetry...it's deep and very personal.You really are awesome writer.keep it up!

Mon, August 20th, 2012 9:52am

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Thank you so much!-
love2loveyou

Mon, August 20th, 2012 3:12pm

Ali Hassan Fakhoury

Very well written peom, good job! :D :D :D
I love the way you write every peom in a way that makes it fun to be read.
~Ali

Wed, August 22nd, 2012 7:44am

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Thank you very much! I truly appreciate it:)-
love2loveyou

Wed, August 22nd, 2012 2:57am

Darkprince108

Simply, a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. You really know your way with poetry, keep it up!

Sun, September 2nd, 2012 3:20am

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Thank you so much! I work it constantly:) Thank you again for reading! Please leave a comment on my page and tell me what you would like me to read!-
love2loveyou

Sun, September 2nd, 2012 9:06am

SlowWriter

I liked it very much. I hope to read your other work very soon. :)

Sat, September 8th, 2012 9:23pm

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Thank you so much!:)-
love2loveyou

Sat, September 8th, 2012 8:14pm

Stolentiara

Ohh cute poem I lyked it alot!

Wed, September 12th, 2012 12:21pm

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Thank you...-
love2loveyou

Wed, September 12th, 2012 7:23am

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