Curiosity Killed the Cat

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic

im neutral about this one. i loved the descriptions but i feel like i didnt send my message clearly

why not run away.
the door behind is still open,
with no intent on closing itself.
yet curiosity is overwhelming.
cats are smart.
and they were killed.
but what is at the end of this hallway?
behind the lock door...
the walls are blank.
every step pulling closer.
the contrast like the shadows of hand crawling,
amongst the cracks of the hardwood floor.
each plank crying under the weight.
dust falls done through their opening mouths.
cobwebs inhabit the ceiling.
draping down like a thick fog.
with every step,
the presence of the key grow in my mind.
as with every step my hand heat up.
the key feels so cool and soothing.
is this key the cure to this fever?
soon it will let my thoughts and feeling free
as i open the door.

Submitted: October 07, 2009

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OMG! tht was so great! I like it so much!

Wed, October 7th, 2009 2:38pm


thanks you :) hope you'll come back

Wed, October 7th, 2009 6:04pm


really good work loved it sj

Wed, October 7th, 2009 5:53pm

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