That Girl

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Gay and Lesbian  |  House: Booksie Classic

Just a regular girl with a crush

That Girl, with the sunbeam smile to match golden hair,
That Girl, the one who smells of pomegranate and sunshine,
That Girl, the one who holds me in her arms as a friend,
That Girl, who I wish held me as a lover with an embrace strong and safe,
That Girl, who's gentle gaze sends my heart aflutter,
That Girl, who's soft eyes hold great knowledge and beauty,
That Girl, I am forever her prisoner, trapped in the stare of her eyes,
That Girl, her being captivates me
That Girl...oh, That Girl...
Some say it's wrong,
Some say it's immoral,
But to me, it's everything right, 
Because in my heart, That Girl, that beautiful Girl,
Will always and forever be,
Mine <3


Submitted: May 16, 2012

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Kayleighhh0812

All I can say that this is amazing. I love the way you describe the girl and your love for her. It's just amazing.

Wed, May 16th, 2012 3:46am

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Awwww thanks you. I will check out some of your work. :)

Thu, May 17th, 2012 10:14am

inspiredbylove22

AW this is really written well, with tons of feeling. You capture the love well :)

Wed, May 16th, 2012 9:37am

lesbianrebel94

you my dear are amazing keep it up

Wed, May 16th, 2012 2:42pm

LoveIsAlwaysRight

Thanks guys :) I'm surprised you thought it was good. I'm just starting on this website.

Wed, May 16th, 2012 5:16pm

inspiredbylove22

Dont doubt the power of emotion, it turns words into magic. You write wonderfully, dont doubt yourself

Thu, May 17th, 2012 9:41am

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Ha ha thank you for all your comments. I really apreciate it. :)

Thu, May 17th, 2012 6:04am

lesbianrebel94

i was new not too long ago myself progress happens and comments and support have helped me continue to write and be proud of my work

Thu, May 17th, 2012 4:56pm

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haha yeah, I hope so.

Thu, May 17th, 2012 10:10am

sleepingwithsirens

Aw cute :) it's good

Tue, June 5th, 2012 1:59am

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Thanks for reading :) glad you liked it

Tue, June 5th, 2012 7:15pm

paloma0703

I love this one! It reminds me of my best friend and I. She's now my fiance and still my best friend. :)

Sun, December 30th, 2012 3:39am

OKesta

Beautiful! It's so encouraging to see new poets on this site. I started here a long time ago (almost 7 years), and your stuff reminds me of how it used to feel, when all of these feelings were fresh and new, coming out, finding yourself and someone to sweep off their feet. Keep writing! I love what I've seen so far.

Sat, January 5th, 2013 6:31am

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Wow, it's been so long since I've been on here, I just, FINALLY got my password back. Thanks!

Fri, February 1st, 2013 6:59am

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