Poem by: lovepoetryandbooks
trees, night, moon, sky, beach
Submitted: January 28, 2012
The morning light looks upon the fading night
as the sun tells the moon good night.
And the sea listens to palm trees
On the dream like stone beach,
As they sway in a dance with the sky.
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Loved this. So tranquil, and dreamy. It flows so well for such a simple poem. Great job, I really enjoyed it.
Thanks for the comment. I really appreciate it. It's nice when people write something about other peoples work.
A nice poem and the words create a beautiful picture...I would not call this a rhyming poem as only the first two lines rhyme....Well written
Thanks for the comment. I usually don't write like this, all dreamlike and fluffy. If you have read any of my other poems, you'd know.
I love your poem ^_^ I wish I knew how to write poetry.
You good at writing books. Thanks for the comment
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