Who Knew That

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Who knew that...

Who Knew

Who Knew that with bad

times the outcomes are good,

Who knew that life would seem

unperfect for some but just okay for others,

Who knew that once you loose a friend are someone

you care for you try to stay in touch or maybe gain another

who knew that life could take its own course

in order for you to make mistakes and seek out ,

new beginnings like, your dreams, the fun and maybe romance

Maybe someone knew and never told you

or never took the time to show you 

who knew what the world would actually come to be.


Submitted: December 04, 2010

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SDCD7

Good one but try to add some rhyming and metaphors/similes from the next time, they make it more lively :)

Sat, December 4th, 2010 11:21am

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Thanks will be sure to do :)

Sat, December 4th, 2010 8:34am

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krazeoak

Real easy on the mind (haha) i like to write short poems too

Mon, March 14th, 2011 11:40am

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thanks : ) and cool

Mon, March 14th, 2011 10:47pm

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jhanery

Hello, yes! as promised, I'm here to read one of the works of those who also read my work, jhanery here. hehe.
COMMENT:
Hey? I'm still thinking what to say...
Okay, now I know.
The poem doesn't really rhyme, something not my style, but I don't really find it dull, and I don't know why.
Maybe because of its simplicity that it turned out good to me.
Or just that, the story behind I could completely relate with. Still figuring that out. Anyways!
Good job! keep it up :)

Tue, November 29th, 2011 1:07pm

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