Up and Down Round and Round, poem by LovesDarkAngel

Up and Down Round and Round

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When feel so absolutly alone and depressed take a almost physical form in poerty.

Submitted: January 08, 2012

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Up and down

Round and round

Cant stop these feelings

From overtaking

Want to runaway

But I have to stay

Up and down

Round and round

Searched my room a thousand times

Never found my one lie

I guess you don’t care

Because I see you stare

I guess it doesn’t matter

If I’m tattered

Up and down

Round and round

Angry and sad

Depressed and bad

Up and down

Round and round

Funny feeling

Just not dealing

Cant take the sound

Keeps pushing me down

Up and down

Round and round

Dizzy and scared

Repeatedly dared

Up and down

Round and round

Universal lie

Just want to die

So cold

Inside my soul

Up and down

Round and round

Sicker and sicker

An unending lure

Happy and sad

Wimpy and bad

Up and down

Round and round

Scared and dead

Being lead

Just want to cry

Tired of the lie

Just want to die

Tired of this life

Hiding in side

Scared that he lied

Up and down

Round and round

Afraid I already lost

Someone has to pay the cost

For the last time

I try to hid

For the last time

I fake a lie

The world fades to black

Because of the control I lack

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Mon, January 9th, 2012 9:22am

this is amazing - I love how the colour of the writing fades out at the end as well, it really gets across the emotion :D

PS hope you're okay :')

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Mon, January 9th, 2012 8:03pm

Thank you! And I'm okay thanks for caring :) the heart ache and pain just let me know how to appreciate the fleeting moments of good, and other wise I wouldn't be able to write with out the emotion.

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Sat, January 28th, 2012 11:19pm

I really like this .. it reads quickly and flows soooo well... very emotive words filled with depth ..love it!

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