About how the Sun is the same as me, for we are both noticed, but ignored.

((Author's note: It gets really bad towards the ending, but I decided to stick with it.))

The Sun blazes hot against the sky

As we all look up in blearing eyes

As I look up more and more and more

It resembles me, for because it is ignored


The Sun is always blazing and shining

Giving warmth to those that are hiding

And the same thing just so happens with me

When I reach out my hand to ones that try to flee


The Sun is ignored, for it is deadly

And dissipates anyone that comes, even those who are friendly

And the same thing just so happens with me

For I am bad luck for anyone that nears me


So the Sun is one that is ignored

But still helps others in a kindly demeanor

Even though people still leaves scars

The Sun will still support from within the stars


And the same thing just so happens with me

For I am one to support from behind a tree

From within a house

From behind one with a blouse

I will still be one to support from the obscurity

Submitted: February 11, 2014

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This was pleasant to read and I liked the obscured rhyming pattern. Great work. :)

Wed, February 12th, 2014 4:03am


Oh my, thank you so much!

Tue, February 11th, 2014 8:36pm

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