I keep sinking
deeper into this frozen abyss
of nothing but
numbness and sadness
that keeps eating away
at my mind and heart.
I feel so cold
and i feel so sad
with no way to escape
the grips of this monster.
it has me trapped ,
wont let me go
for if it does
i might never venture
back into its grips.
Feeding me with sadness
and chasing away my feelings
keeping me locked away
is the monster i call
Depression.
Submitted: November 03, 2011
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I hope that your knight in shining armor comes riding into your life and slays that monster.
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He is currently trying to slay my monster and im so greatful :)
Wed, November 9th, 2011 7:18pm
Your poem is very heartfelt and the reader can easily feel it. Great wording!
Thu, November 10th, 2011 3:45pm
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Thanks i tried really hard on this one because i wanted to get my feelings out
Thu, November 10th, 2011 12:22pm
I can connect very well with this poem... I love it! Keep up the good work!
Mon, November 14th, 2011 10:19pm
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im glad and sad that you can relate because its a very sad thing to have to deal with
Mon, November 14th, 2011 5:25pmFacebook Comments
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*raises hand*
Mon, November 7th, 2011 3:42pmSame here.
Great work, nice poem. =D
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thank you very much :)
Mon, November 7th, 2011 12:56pm