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this is about how ive felt for awhile now and it seems like no one notices.

I keep sinking

deeper into this frozen abyss

of nothing but

numbness and sadness

that keeps eating away

at my mind and heart.


I feel so cold

and i feel so sad

with no way to escape

the grips of this monster.


it has me trapped ,

wont let me go

for if it does

i might never venture

back into its grips.


Feeding me with sadness

and chasing away my feelings

keeping me locked away

is the monster i call


Submitted: November 03, 2011

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*raises hand*
Same here.

Great work, nice poem. =D

Mon, November 7th, 2011 3:42pm


thank you very much :)

Mon, November 7th, 2011 12:56pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

I hope that your knight in shining armor comes riding into your life and slays that monster.

Thu, November 10th, 2011 3:14am


He is currently trying to slay my monster and im so greatful :)

Wed, November 9th, 2011 7:18pm


Your poem is very heartfelt and the reader can easily feel it. Great wording!

Thu, November 10th, 2011 3:45pm


Thanks i tried really hard on this one because i wanted to get my feelings out

Thu, November 10th, 2011 12:22pm


I can connect very well with this poem... I love it! Keep up the good work!

Mon, November 14th, 2011 10:19pm


im glad and sad that you can relate because its a very sad thing to have to deal with

Mon, November 14th, 2011 5:25pm

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