I wrote this for someone to tell them how i felt. Its me talking in third person

Very few people

have seen the real her

or saw tears fall

down her face.


Would you be willing

to see her for her

or only see what

you want her to be?


Can you see her tears

and still be strong?

or would you run

so you dont have to see

sadness upon her face.


Are you scared to see

a past full of pain?

one that broke a strong girl

into nothing

and haunts ever memory

and tainted her view

on life and love?


She scared away

everyone she loves

just by showing

them everything.


Please say you

wont be the same

amd run away.

Dont leave her alone

in this scary place.

Submitted: November 03, 2011

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Loretta Jane

Wow... This is so. Just wow. i see the deep emotion bult into it. Can you read Mask of light its one of my poems that relates to this.

Thu, November 3rd, 2011 10:56pm


there is so much behind it. thats how i like to write my poems so that it makes people look behind the words. i love having that affect on people where they can relate because it makes me feel not that alone in this world. and sure ill read your poem

Sun, November 6th, 2011 10:04am

Stormbird Throneshaker

Real heart grabbing. You have my vote.

Thu, November 10th, 2011 1:12am


:) thanks

Wed, November 9th, 2011 7:14pm

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