Please Dont Leave(1)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

i never want him to leave me

I'm letting you in

dont make me take you out.

i want you here

but are you willing to stay?


I really do love you

no matter what adults say.

Anyone can experience love

no matter what their age.


You bring out the best in me

even when i think

that im the worst person in the world.

you make me smile

even when im broken

into a million pieces.


You help me every chance you get

whether its big or small

and you dont complain

even when i dont want you

to know whats wrong.


You promised me

that when i fall

youll be there to pick me up

and brush away my tears

and make sure

i no longer have any fears.


you bring out the best in me.

you make me feel worth something.

Please stay in my life.

you make me feel okay.


Submitted: November 08, 2011

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That's what real love does to you: you NEED the other.
Great poem. =)

Wed, November 9th, 2011 7:12pm


thank you very much. i do need him :)

Wed, November 9th, 2011 12:13pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

Finally, the poem of hope and love that I hoped would be amongst your writtings. I hope that he appreciates you with lots of never ending love for always and forever and a day kind of love.
Beautiful poem, just beautiful. A million flowers to you.

Thu, November 10th, 2011 4:13am


Thank you very much. he is the thing that keeps me going everyday. he is the guy that every girl wants but never can find. hes treats me like im a princess and always wants me to be happy and i love him dearly. he is my knight in shining armor (quoted from you in another comment that you left)

Wed, November 9th, 2011 8:26pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

Baltimore huh? Been there. A friend of mine has a twin sister that use to live on Shagbark Rd. off of Dornton Ave. I liked all the malls down Eastern Blvd. Oh, by the way, I'm happy for you.

Thu, November 10th, 2011 4:49am


yeah baltimore is where i grew up and it brings back all the memories. from my mother to anthony. everything happened there and since i left i feel so disconnected from myself. i love the malls down there too haha

Wed, November 9th, 2011 8:53pm


what ive been trying to get you to understand is how much i need you as well.

Mon, November 14th, 2011 3:36am


i know that but i never really expressed how much i truly need you but i hope one day i will be able too

Sun, November 13th, 2011 7:38pm


very well! I have to check others

Mon, November 14th, 2011 4:37pm


thanks :)

Mon, November 14th, 2011 1:10pm


This is really good! It's touching to me(': I don't know if it's just cause I'm a bit emotional right now but I really like it! :D

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 2:55am


thanks :) i hope that it touched you in a good way? haha

Fri, November 25th, 2011 6:16pm

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