This is my feelings towards someone special to me

Im lost in a sea of feelings

with waves of emotions crashing over head

some days im drowing in blue

others im floating in white.

 

most days i feel numb when im there.

others i feel as though i belong anywhere

but in that cursed sea of blue.

 

Youve saved me

from drowning in there

but i have visits

in that deep blue sea of death

brought there by glass kisses and icy glazed eyes.

 

When im with you

im flying in a sky full of white

but when youre gone

im drowning in the suffocating blue

with waves crashing

making it impossible to escape

without you.

 


Submitted: November 01, 2011

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My Overactive Imagination

i love this, i can really relate at the moment. you wrote this beautifully. i gave it my vote (:

Tue, November 1st, 2011 8:37pm

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thankyou so much it means a lot to me because so much is hidden behind every word i write and no one really understands

Wed, November 2nd, 2011 6:29pm

TwoStepz

i agree with the other comments, this was enjoyable to read and i found it sweet:) awesome writing! Keep it up;D x

TwoStepz x

Sun, November 6th, 2011 9:15pm

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thanks :)

Sun, November 6th, 2011 1:19pm

Stormbird Throneshaker

I can tell that your poetry is not blab ... blab ... blab, all from the mind. It's cry ... cry ... cry, all from the heart. It's heart, mind, soul, blood, sweat, and tears, all together from the heart, to the p.c. screen for us to read and feel along with you.
Your writting sure does move me.

Thu, November 10th, 2011 3:29am

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why thank you! i guess my goal is being reached. i want people to be affected by my writing. i want them to know how i feel with out coming out about it. thankyou very much for reading my poetry

Wed, November 9th, 2011 7:34pm

Leah Winchester

the above comment says it all! you are very talented :)

Thu, November 10th, 2011 9:25am

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Thankyou very much :)

Thu, November 10th, 2011 3:10am

Coralie

I can tell that you were very passionate about this when you wrote it, and it clearly shines through the whole poem! Keep it up, because you're an amazing author.

Mon, November 14th, 2011 3:54am

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why thankyou :) you are very kind :)

Sun, November 13th, 2011 7:55pm

hoplessromantic

I love how you express the way you cant be without the person
It is a lovely poem and I will be on to read more!

Mon, November 14th, 2011 10:17pm

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thankyou very much :)

Mon, November 14th, 2011 5:26pm

colonialsgirl33

that poem is awesome! i never knew you were such a good writer!

Fri, November 18th, 2011 3:43pm

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Awwww your soo nice to me :) thanks :)

Fri, November 18th, 2011 7:45am

Brian W

A good poem you have a talent of putting your emotions into them..Well written

Sun, November 20th, 2011 10:51pm

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thankyou. that means alot to me

Mon, November 21st, 2011 3:04pm

GiggleMonster2

AGH! I love this!(: I've been heree before actually...sad that it's gone but oh well. I love the description and the imagery! Great poem, it really is!(:
-Zarah!

Tue, November 22nd, 2011 3:17am

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thankyou! and im sorry that its gone :(

Fri, November 25th, 2011 6:08pm

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