Blinding Love
How on earth could I be
So stupid as to never see
What has been put in front of me
Someone who set emotions free
A girl of love, life, and laughter
Everything I’m chasing after
Perfection here is not the key
But she’s as close as one could be
I know not why she’s drawn to me
For compared to her I’m far beneath
Though yet she sees me not as I am
But as what I can be, a greater man
And so for her I try and reach
The limits through which I can breach
To grow in love, and adoration
For her my one true motivation.
Submitted: August 07, 2014
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loved it! great poem!
Thu, August 14th, 2014 3:02pm
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Thanks a ton!
Thu, August 14th, 2014 7:38pmFacebook Comments
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R.L. Zabel
Wow... I totally wrote a comment yesterday but it must not have stuck! But this one is so incredibly amazing! Whoever she is/was- she's lucky to be/have been so admired by someone as much as this!
Fri, August 8th, 2014 2:56pmAuthor
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You did write this comment yesterday, for some reason I accidentally and unintentionally deleted it. Sorry! And this poem isn't written for anyone in particular, just something that was stuck in my head. don't forget to like the poems and leave comments with suggestions for next weeks poems!
Fri, August 8th, 2014 10:20am