A Sweet Song

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem

Put the needle on the record and

listen to the record play.

All I want is soft music and candles

on this bad day.

Then I close my eyes and visualize the words it say,

and suddenly all of the stress just goes away.

I love the way music puts me in that

special place.

No worries.

No fears.

And everythings okay.

The music stops

and it's back to reality.

And when I open my eyes

I remember that i'm unhappy.

Submitted: July 24, 2011

© Copyright 2021 Lucian Dowell. All rights reserved.

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glitter snow426

oh wow, so wonderfully written!! A very special work, LOVE IT!!

Sun, July 24th, 2011 7:59pm

dewey green

Keep playing the music. It awakens your soul.
And frees your mind from the pain.

Wed, July 28th, 2021 7:11am

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