Too Young To Die

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem is about a fictional girl who lives in the wrong place and doesnt have the best life. When she reaches out for love, she goes to the wrong person and enters a life full of more problems then she had before. This is My own poem and has been published and I have copywrite to it! I hope you enjoy!

Too Young To Die

So, there once lived this girl. She was a pretty little bright girl. She had huge dreams about leaving the ghetto and getting away from those drug feans. Her dad left the family in the cold streets. The poor girl was only three. Once her looks grew she got attention from many guys. They filled her head with compliments, promises and lies. All she wanted was the perfect guy. Since she never got "father love" she looks for it in these thugs. They are nothing but usless young boys who will treat her heart like a toy. To her they seem like the real thing. However, to them she is just a one night fling. Along came a boy who took her heart and her virginity. He did it ever so sinfully. Many days had gone and she waited and waited for him to call. It hurt her so bad that she cried her face raw. Finally, he called but the call was bad. His voice made her so sad. He told her he was tested and was HIV positive. He reminded her that they didn’t use protection. Now the disease has made her its selection. Then she ran to the doctor screaming and crying. Her hopes and dreams are slowly dying. Once she got tested, she learned she was indeed infested. To make things worse she was pregnant also. So along with the birth the disease will follow. Then she sat down with the saddest look one could ever see. The poor girl was only thirteen. This disease will soon take her life. She prayed to make things right. What did she do? What did she say? She watched herself as her life faded away. Im sure you are all upset and concerned. Yet, if your truly concerned you'll see that theres a lesson learned.

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This is dedicated to all of the souls that are infected with this plague. My prayers are with you all.

 


Submitted: September 08, 2012

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lloyd1998

This is really good. You have a good writing style.

Sat, September 8th, 2012 4:02am

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Thanks very much that means alot! Im new at this and trying to build up so thank you ! :)

Sat, September 8th, 2012 8:28pm

attanasio

Good sentiment and portayed with style. The formatting needs to be changed but I understand booksie after being here quite a while and sometimes this happens.

Sat, September 8th, 2012 12:21pm

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Thank you very much! Thanks for your your comment about the formatting! Im going to look it up on how to formatt because I had done it on my microsoft word but it changed when I had it copied on the final copy on Booksie! :)

Sat, September 8th, 2012 8:25pm

melissataggart

very well written i loved it

Sun, September 16th, 2012 4:44am

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That means alot Melissa! Ill be putting up my first short story soon so check it out when I do! If you have any writtings Id love to read them :)

Mon, September 24th, 2012 4:26pm

Carlee

This is amazing. I love your writing. Its wonderful. Keep going(:

Mon, October 22nd, 2012 1:56am

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Thanks alot..:) :)

Sun, November 4th, 2012 2:05pm

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