An Unbroken Contract.

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Very very beautiful in my opinion. Written by Me (Lul) about one's love life.

Had it been so long

Since I saw her face

I can't stand this,

This uncongenial state

-

I miss the times

when I embraced her close

I could taste her breath

and how her eyes froze

-

Locked in mine

leeping far into her heart

for I feel

this is only the start

-

We had our times

Of good and bad

I can only see

what we had

-

Now I am old

weak and dull

I had made a promise

to hold her soul

-

Once on a tree

far from my home

where the woodpeckers pecked

and the bumble bee's flown

-

I carved her name

and my own

for ever and ever

and never alone

-

She broke my promise

may years back

Her ash remains

In a small little sack

-

And still in my heart

Her key remains

for she left the world

with my heart --in her hands.


Submitted: December 05, 2008

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Vampire Princces

awww so sweet and sad, that's great did it happened to you?

Sat, December 6th, 2008 12:00am

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Well I am not old and weak. But people I love that have stolen bits and pieces of my heart have left me. :) But all lives well, I continue my dayys. :)

Fri, December 5th, 2008 4:06pm

Pratibha

She broke my promise

may years back

Her ash remains

In a small little sack

THIS IS SO SWEET AND SO SAD...
lucky is the person who is near you and unlucky r those who somehow didnot get to know u before they decided to leave...

as someone has rightly said, "when demi GODS leave, GODs arrive"....

life is so unpredictable and people don't understand...

this is what i honestly like about ur poems...they kind of surprise us...and they r definitely unpredictable....

this one is so emotional.....

needless to add that all my votes r for u

Sat, December 6th, 2008 3:44am

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Aww, you so amazingly sweet! !
In this poem, I was trying to explain with the Ashes that she didn't leave me, she died.
Thanks so much, for the most amazing compliment ever! :)

Sat, December 6th, 2008 5:48am

Gentlespirit

This is a sad tale of having loved and lost the person closest to your soul. But the realisation that they reside as part of who you are. Always.

Lovely. I really liked it and 'voted'

Have a bliss joy and love filled season!

:0)

Thu, December 11th, 2008 4:44pm

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You too!!!! :DD
Thanks, for the comment!! :)

Thu, December 11th, 2008 1:18pm

nuttyz

awwh...such a sweeet poem!XD
I loved it!!

Sun, December 14th, 2008 1:44pm

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Hey!!! Thanks!! (Hey I spelled Thanks right this time ) :)
Glad to hear you like it! :)

Sun, December 14th, 2008 5:52am

EwanMac

So sweet, and truly adorable. You write in such away that brings the words right of the page (screen) and into our hearts, I would really count this among one of my favorite poems.

Wed, December 17th, 2008 11:14pm

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Hey thanks a bunch!! :)

Wed, December 17th, 2008 3:22pm

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