Goodbye My Friend!

Poem by: lumiere

Summary

I wrote this back in 2010, after my childhood friend have passed away. I was heartbroken and shocked. Actually, I wasn't planning on writing anything. It just happened by itself.

I never considered writing poetry before and never thought this qualifies to be called a poem, but recently a very dear friend encouraged me to post this. I would truly appreciate your honest feedback and criticism.

In the loving memory of a dear friend. R.I.P <3

Content

Submitted: July 19, 2012

A A A | A A A

Content

Submitted: July 19, 2012

A A A

A A A


Goodbye my old friend,
Rest in peace!
You broke our hearts
With your abrupt departure.
You should've stayed a while,
May be, it wouldn't have been such a torture!


You were as bright as sunlight,
But how could you leave?
Leaving packs of stacked memories.
Oh my friend!
Do you still remember?
When we were kids,
As we chased our future
With such a pleasure,
As we ran on the road,
Not knowing the end.


How?
And who thought would lose you so soon
Oh my friend!
Do you think this pain would come to an end?
Do you think we can forget your features?
Why?
Who would've guessed you would leave so soon
Like spring's warm afternoon...


© Copyright 2016 lumiere . All rights reserved.

Goodbye My Friend! Goodbye My Friend!

Status: Finished

Genre: Poetry

Houses:

Details

Status: Finished

Genre: Poetry

Houses:

Summary

I wrote this back in 2010, after my childhood friend have passed away. I was heartbroken and shocked. Actually, I wasn't planning on writing anything. It just happened by itself.

I never considered writing poetry before and never thought this qualifies to be called a poem, but recently a very dear friend encouraged me to post this. I would truly appreciate your honest feedback and criticism.

In the loving memory of a dear friend. R.I.P <3

Add Your Comments:

Comments

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

avatar

Author
Reply

Other Content by lumiere

Add picture

Paste the link to picture in the entry below:

— or —

Drag a picture from your file manager into this box,
or click to select.

Add video

Paste the link to Youtube video in the following entry:

Existing Comments:
Bad selection

Cannot annotate a non-flat selection. Make sure your selection starts and ends within the same node.

(example of bad selection): This is bold text and this is normal text.
(example of good selection): This is bold text and this is normal text.
Bad selection

An annotation cannot contain another annotation.

Anonymous
Really delete this comment?
Anonymous
Really delete this comment?

There was an error uploading your file.


    
Anonymous