Nothing but emptyness...

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

I don't feel love.
Nor all my kindness.
Nothing but emptiness..

I don't feel love. Nor all my kindness. Nothing but emptiness... Not even any pride of being me. Selfishness or even greed. Nothing but emptiness... Rejection of loneliness. Happiness led to hollowness. Nothing but emptiness... For I am heartless. For you have broken this...


Submitted: March 16, 2013

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Km2

Wow, deeply passionate. Can really feel the internal struggle. Wonderful little poem. Proud to be your first like and read. Do come check some of mine, if you like? I'm sure there's something you will enjoy. :)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 6:39pm

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Thank you it's being appreciated a lot ! See I am sort of new at poetry but I hope it's not bad for my age of 14 ... I'm looking forward to go check out all of your pieces.*#.
*#Luwanda#* =)

Sat, March 16th, 2013 12:48pm

quetzala

great poem

Fri, May 2nd, 2014 11:46pm