It looked cold!

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The sun no longer felt, but ...

Submitted: January 10, 2013

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Submitted: January 10, 2013





The sun no longer felt, but felt the cold ... and very well!

It was possible to see the stars and the night lights.

He walked for a new space, a space with grass, benches, piers and docks.

He was down!

Maybe the pills were not to take effect, maybe they were not bearing fruit! Perhaps neither cold, nor sleep, nor time were helping. Perhaps nothing was helping!

The river was so calm that seemed to have iced up. But a canoe said no, that could not be frozen. 

He did not feel alone or accompanied. Just felt. Or not felt. He did not know ...

The cold was freezing his thoughts.

He looked at the sky, begged and wiped tears. 

He cleaned them again and again and returned home, very slowly, so that the tears had time to dry.


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