an hour with joe part 2

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

poetry

Like music to the ear
the songs that I hear
Hydras wine divine and non to forgettable
prone and in a coma
the bristle of a brush the sands of yesterday
and waves that lead to soma
a paint by the meadow
an epic movement yet again
friends of the present
like presents yet to open.
... Suns warmth non dormant
a catapult
beats notes measured
discipline and pleasure
alive and striving with dessert in the desert
open arms a beckoned call
always give and take
to journey on the soldiers song
until we meet again.


Submitted: February 22, 2013

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Sultry Alice

I like both parts I and II. I think this half has better flow and seems more poetic.

Very different and much enjoyed.

Alice

Sat, February 23rd, 2013 10:38pm

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thanks for the comments and motivation!

Sat, February 23rd, 2013 3:14pm

TheTeddybearNinja

I agree with Sultry Alice. This one is more poetic story versus the last one that was like a coded story being told by a story teller. Good job once again :)

Fri, April 26th, 2013 1:31am

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Thanks!

Thu, April 25th, 2013 6:33pm

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