Heart-Spire Manor

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Status: In Progress  |  Genre: Horror  |  House: Booksie Classic


This is a supernatural story of gaining lost feelings

Submitted: December 30, 2017

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Submitted: December 30, 2017

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You won't a group of kids argue about who should go into the huge abandoned mansion it has a creepy feeling like the light that comes from the windows at night and faint sounds heard by the neighbors at night and weird people that are always walking because of that place like the tall man that wanders the halls at night and stands the entrance in the day he never talks he looks menacing and is always stares at people if they get into sight and never gets close just stares wears a black trench coat and top hat only person seen his face is david an orphan that hangs out with the group of friends that. "David do you know that guy's a demon" Chris says "shut up Chris you know that demons are killers David would'nt be here right?" as the kids argue at the Tallman's appearance David waves at him he lights a cigarette and smiles gesturing his hand towards them and walks off. The group finally gains the courage and goes in every one is hiding behind David and david is trying to stay calm but is still scared hardly fooling anyone David says "there is nothin' here lets go back" as he says that a person a girl their same age walks aound a corner and stares at them the kids are calmed down "hey are you okay here alone" David says she turns to face them pure red eyes and black hair pale skin she screams loud and chases them "OH CRAP RUN!" david yells he turns to see them running away as he tries to catch up he loses his way and finds himself in the living room a large space with only broken and rotted furniture. The screaming is getting closer panting heavily David says to himself "can't run anymore i need to hide" he hides under a flipped over couch she runs in and screams she doesn't notice david as she walks around menacingly she passes David and goes to another room David gets up and feels a faint breath on his neck as he gets up and runs for the door only hoping that the thing behind him is slow as he hears that unmistakable scream ring behind him she jumps and lands on him David gets knocked to the ground and passes out. As he awakens he sees the tallman standing over me he seems different not as menacing as before he says "the kid that attacked you left she isn't going to kill anyone but she will attack you if you stay around here leave and forget about this place" the man walks out the door and disappears into the darkness david gets up and walks in a daze until he sees light and walks he sees a door and opens it he is outside and stumbles around then hears a small rasping breath behind him he turns to see that girl standing behind him at the frame of the door with blood soaked hands she retreats into the darkness of the house those blood red eyes that watch him as they fade into the darkness. David stuck in a stunned daze looking into the darkness that comes from the door David's friends find him looking at the door they shout to hi "let's get out of here!" he turns to see them stands up and walks to them. Hardly a second passed when his friends yell "Run David!" then the scream cried out behind him David runs to his friends and when he finally gets there he turn to see the girl standing where david was a moment ago she runs back inside screaming the kids run till they can no longer hear the dreadful cry they head home.


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