Succubus (Runner up 1st place)

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Succubus (Runner up 1st place)

Status: Finished

Succubus (Runner up 1st place)

Poem by: madaGDarko

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Genre: Poetry

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This is the first time i have ever par-taken in a contest so I'm really exited. I chose a creature i know very little about so it is a bit plain but i hope u all like it.

I got this image from http://uk.wrs.yahoo.com/_ylt=A0WTf2zelSdLbRsAJqBWBQx./SIG=12e2d4h0h/EXP=1260971870/**http%3A//www.hentai-foundry.com/piccies/r/rmichaud/29661.jpg so i reserve no right to it.

Please comment, good or bad - I'm still learning. ^_^

Summary

This is the first time i have ever par-taken in a contest so I'm really exited. I chose a creature i know very little about so it is a bit plain but i hope u all like it.

I got this image from http://uk.wrs.yahoo.com/_ylt=A0WTf2zelSdLbRsAJqBWBQx./SIG=12e2d4h0h/EXP=1260971870/**http%3A//www.hentai-foundry.com/piccies/r/rmichaud/29661.jpg so i reserve no right to it.

Please comment, good or bad - I'm still learning. ^_^

Content

Submitted: December 15, 2009

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Submitted: December 15, 2009

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SUCCUBUS (Mythical/fantasy contest)
By: Adwoa G. Darko

From the depth of darkness,
She emerges and enters through the gates of mortals.
She preys on the sexual pleasures of men
And in lust, becomes man’s best friend.

With sexual activation that has no limit,
Man cannot expect to survive the night with her.
Every man’s dream is to get laid
And laid he would be with her.

In her endless river of joy
He experiences the most passionate intercourse
His numerous ejaculations are evidence of this
But she shows no sign of being satisfied.

“Beautiful creature with no shame,
Leave me alone. This is rape!” he cries.
“You loved it the first time,
Fifty more shouldn’t hurt,” she replies.

He begs for release
But she thrusts on with no mercy.
Fifteen times he climaxed,
An annoying zero is the number of her climax

In his limpness,
She gains pleasure.
At dawn, the demon finally climax
And exhaustion overpowers his inevitable doom.

Through the gates of mortals
She exits to the realm of acknowledged myth
And in humiliation,
He enters the world of eternal impotency.


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