The Devil's humour

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Everyone has a dark side and although we hate to admit it, that little devil lurks around in our heads. This is a little something to kinda explain it. Hope u like it. Please comment.

P.S. I got the cover picture from http://www.layoutsparks.com/myspace-layouts/dark-and-evil_0 so i reserve no right to it.

The Devil’s Humour

By: Adwoa G. Darko

Your misery makes me laugh
Your happiness makes me cough.
You have a God
I am your sub-conscious god.
I will make you worship me
But your character does that anyway.

Filthy peasant! When will you ever learn?
Failure and disgrace is what you earn
But you never learn!
Riches I will drop on your doorstep
Pleasure, you will never miss.
Come to me and you will be happy, promise!

Fools! Why do you curse me?!
In your bid to hurt me,
You draw me closer to you.
Sniff, sniff, sniff
Is that fear I smell?
Curse not so that yea shall not be cursed.
You make me laugh!

Misery and Joy begins now.
The end results of your decisions, I know not.
But I promise you this,
You will follow me.
It is a fact.
The heart of man is filled with the pleasures of the world
So you see, you will follow me.


Submitted: October 24, 2009

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Nacre Aura

Yeah...how true. Deep one..

Sun, October 25th, 2009 7:18am

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I know right. Thank you for commenting. :)

Sun, October 25th, 2009 2:46am

UnderxYourxSpell

Yet another deep and powerfully written poem. Great work! :]

Sun, October 25th, 2009 4:46pm

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Thank you. Am glad you liked it. :)

Mon, October 26th, 2009 3:57am

Marlena

Neat I like it, so dark yet so true. For some reason it makes me think of Alucard from hellsing.

Mon, October 26th, 2009 1:38am

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Thank you. Hellsing? haha, i came across the manga once but i couldn't read it. There was only volume three, the rest seemed to have disappeared from the lib. :(

Mon, October 26th, 2009 3:56am

mack2468

Great peom!:)

Mon, October 26th, 2009 9:56pm

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Thank you.:)

Mon, October 26th, 2009 4:43pm

Talha Hyder

Hi!
I am commenting in a way that I am writing you a letter, but this is my style.
I think that you wrote many poem that's why you know how to balance stanzas. The poem in like a monograph, related to one topic. Not your single word is profane. That's Good. I want to ask you that who is your favorite poet, Mine is Allama Iqbal, the national poet of Pakistan, India and Iran.

So keep writing in the same way and I will search for some more poems of yours. The topic you chose was good and very intresting and the way you wrote was also nice that you are not a devil but for some moments you thought that you rae a devil and you wrote this poem.

This thing is very necessary.
Keep it up!:)

Regards,
Talha Hyder

Tue, October 27th, 2009 4:45pm

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Thank you so much. Glad you liked it. Actually, i have not written that many poems. I only started writing poems this April. It's sort of weird but cos i sort disliked poetry in High School but now i live it. Prett cool, uh? i think Shakespear is my favourite poet; haven't read that many poems.lol. :)

Tue, October 27th, 2009 10:21am

Tyler Gohde

I don't have much to say to this, so I here is my comment:

I truly liked this poem. Keep up the fantastic work!

Fri, October 30th, 2009 10:13am

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Wow thank u. :D

Fri, October 30th, 2009 4:07am

Graeme Montrose

well penned, great description, i like the way you put yourself in the devil's shoes to think like him. Masterfully done!

Sat, November 21st, 2009 12:23pm

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Thank you. I have a pretty messed up mind (joking)^_^.

Sat, November 21st, 2009 3:34pm

Mistress of Word Play

This was another wonderful write my friend. Quite the imagination and inspiration. Love how you described the devil's thoughts. Great job. Susan :)

Tue, December 8th, 2009 3:35pm

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Thank u so much. Glad u liked it. ;D

Tue, December 8th, 2009 9:32am

NazireC

I Love the picture and the poem you've written. Title really grabs the attention of the author.
Well done!

Thu, December 31st, 2009 8:43pm

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lol. I love the picture as well; it has the ominious feel i wanted for the poem. Thank u for commenting. ;D

Thu, December 31st, 2009 4:14pm

RaisinGirl

really really cool :D I commend u for writing this...it give's a good feel, and yeah, they'd make great song lyrics, I believe...;D *m*

Wed, January 6th, 2010 8:46am

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lol! thank u so much. Song lyrics, really?

Wed, January 6th, 2010 1:58am

mommy3

This was a very deep poem but true in a way. I loved it. good job. :)

Thu, January 14th, 2010 2:55am

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It leaves in all of us. Quite annoying really. Thanks for commenting. :D

Thu, January 14th, 2010 7:38am

Sara Blake

I absolutely ADORE it!! It kinda reminds me of "Kuroshitsuji" (it's an anime/manga but I don't know if you have heard of it,lol) with the dark feeling and the deep meaning it has ^-^

Thu, January 28th, 2010 11:36am

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I have have not but i'll check it out. I love anime and manga so i'll definitely check it out. Thanks for commenting. ;D

Thu, January 28th, 2010 11:05am

fantasy writen

Hmm, neat! Making a poem about your darkside is a very creative idea!

Tue, February 2nd, 2010 12:36am

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lol. Thank u. I'll drop by your page very soon. :)

Tue, February 2nd, 2010 2:53am

Savannah AM

That was so awsome love all that....all that....well can't think of the word but what ever it is i loved it it was really well writen sounded like the devil himself is talking to me creepy but awsome!!!

Fri, March 12th, 2010 2:28pm

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haha! Thank you. ;D

Mon, March 15th, 2010 2:18pm

hotai gaston

that was great lmfao!

Fri, March 19th, 2010 3:50am

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lol, thank you.:)

Fri, March 19th, 2010 9:57am

Snapdragon123

Very good. I like how it speaks of how everyone will sucumb.

Sat, May 15th, 2010 10:39am

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Yeah, everyone human is vulnerable to the evil one.

Wed, May 19th, 2010 8:37am

kiwi11

Hmmm... If there's a devil in everyone, then does that mean that some peoples' devil is stronger (for example: murders, robbers, etc.)?

Wed, June 23rd, 2010 5:52pm

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That's an interesting question. I think that we all have evil thoughts but we do not allow it to control us. But when we allow our evil thought to consume us, that's when we loss sight of what is good and thirst for something we perceive as entertaining (ie. robbery, raping, killing sprees) to occupy the emptiness we have created in ourselves or others have created in us.

I hope that helps. ^_^

Wed, June 23rd, 2010 7:04pm

Vincey Delaney

so awesome, very captivating, a huge hit with me!!! You are quite talented, truly!!!

Mon, August 23rd, 2010 12:02pm

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Wow, really?!!! You've absolutely made my day, Vincey. I'm truly thankful for your kind words. :D

Sat, August 28th, 2010 4:11am

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