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I lay limp on the floor

my body frail

my hope crushed

...

The room pitch black

the ground cold

the walls howeling in rage

...

footsteps I hear

it must be time

...

the door slams open

footsteps heading toward me

I brace myself

"no daddy"

...

I see her body

lying limp on the floor

there's nothing i can do

except gaze upon my black and blue body

...

I'm in a safe place now

no more daddy

and besides mommy's here


Submitted: February 24, 2009

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angellynn

Oh! Girl! This is sadly wonderful. You captured abuse exquisitly....

I loved it!

Angellynn

Tue, February 24th, 2009 11:11pm

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thanks a lot!

Tue, February 24th, 2009 6:13pm

ErinB

the ending. :(
i love itttt.
i love you. :)

Tue, February 24th, 2009 11:15pm

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thanks (oh and you don't even have to ask, i love you tooooo(L)

Tue, February 24th, 2009 6:14pm

kaylalebreton

Maddy I'm Crying!
this is so f-ing sad!
YOUR MY HERO?

Wed, February 25th, 2009 1:13am

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awww, thanks but i want to be you when i grow upp.(L)(L)(L)(L)(L)(L)(L)

Tue, February 24th, 2009 6:14pm

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