Edward and Charlotte an eternal love

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Fantasy  |  House: Booksie Classic
It's about a boy named Edward that is in love with a girl named Charlotte and that girl was choosen to be a child of a king and a queen, but theres a queen's sister who is a jealous person and want to kill Charlotte. But then Edward try to safe her and died. Charlotte fell sad and decided to give her life off for Edward.

Submitted: June 08, 2013

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Once upon a time, in a normal city, there was a girl called Charlotte. This girl was an orphan; because when she was a baby, her parents died in an accident. Charlotte didn’t have money like other orphan kids, so she had to stay in an orphanage. At the same orphanage that Charlotte lived, there was a boy called Edward. Edward was in love with Charlotte, But Charlotte wasn’t in love with Edward.

One day a king and a queen visited the orphanage, and they wanted to adopt a child, because the queen couldn’t have a baby.

Everyone in the orphanage was excited. The kings saw all the kids and all of them were nice but the kings could only choose one. The one they chose was Charlotte. Charlotte was speechless, she almost cried of happiness. Charlotte was packing up her stuff, to go and live in the palace.

When Edward knew that Charlotte was the chosen one, he felt so sad and began crying. Edward decided to tell Charlotte that he loved her before she left, but when Edward went to Charlotte’s room, Charlotte had already left the orphanage. Edward sat on the steps of the orphanage to cry.

At the palace, Charlotte was with her new parents, they were showing her the palace.  There was the queen’s sister who was a cruel and jealous person.  The queen’s sister was only third-teen years old and her name was Sabrina.

Sabrina saw Charlotte, and she asked the queen “who is she?” the queen told Sabrina “She is Charlotte she is my new daughter.” Sabrina was starting to get jealous.

At dinner time Sabrina ask the queen if she can make a desert for her, the queen told Sabrina that  she doesn’t have time because she have to organize the room of Charlotte. Sabrina gets mad and jealous with Charlotte.

One day the kings went to Paris, so Sabrina and Charlotte would stay in the palace.

That same day, Edward decided to run away from the orphanage to go and search for Charlotte and give her a letter that he had made.

When the kings left for Paris Sabrina had decided to kill Charlotte, but Sabrina didn’t know how, so she decided to make something easy, a poisonous drink.

It was already time for dinner and Sabrina had her evil plan ready. Charlotte sat down at the table. Sabrina told to Charlotte “Please forgive me for not being a good friend with you” Charlotte answer; “Sure, don’t worry it doesn’t matter” Sabrina ask Charlotte “Would you take this drink that I made for you?” Charlotte answer; “Thanks, I’ll drink it right now”. Sabrina sat down with a smiley face, but when Sabrina sat down somebody knocked the door. Sabrina went and opened the door, it was Edward. Edward asked Sabrina “Where is Charlotte?” Sabrina answered; “She is in the dining room”. Edward run to the dining room, when he saw Charlotte, She had drank of the poisoned drink, so she was lying on the floor, unconscious. Edward asked Sabrina what was happening with Charlotte. Sabrina answered “I poisoned her”, Edward looked up and told Sabrina “You are’ going to pay me what you did to her”. Edward took a sword and tried to kill Sabrina but Sabrina poured poison and Edward slipped, he felt down and his sword killed him.

When the kings came back, they saw all the blood in the floor and they called for Sabrina but Sabrina had escaped.

The kings took Charlotte to the hospital.

Charlotte got well in a few weeks but Edward died. When Charlotte returned to the palace, she went to the dining room and she saw the backpack of Edward. She opened the backpack but there was nothing only a letter, she took the letter and she was reading it, the letter was from Edward and it told her how much he loved her.

When Charlotte finished reading the letter, she felt sad and she started crying. She was thinking about how Edward died because her fault. Charlotte felt so sad, that she decided to commit suicide.

Charlotte now was living with Edward but in another life.

Everyone in the city cried because of Charlotte and Edward, they were a special part of the city.

Every night everyone in the city look up the sky and look the stars and the two stars that are together are Charlotte and Edward.


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