I Know You Are Not Mine

Murnit

Hi, I don't like the fact that u used b/w in your poem If the reader doesn't know what its for you have lost them. I also think u use ... too many times and it distracts from the flow of the poem. Keep on trying though M

Vikrant

There are several things which cause distances between friends but I mainly blame on the rat race of our life. We crave for the best and left behind the one who/which was really made for us. But I think this how our lives go on. Don't want to be philosophical but this another good poem from you. Love this poem.

Antoine Watson I

First i can respect the fact you take take critcism extremly well. I feel the small things like the... and b/w adds to your creativity and lets us into your thoughts. The....to me meant you were in deep thoght and took a pause to express the net thought. I enjoyed the poem. The most important thing to me in poetry is whether your heart is in it, and i felt yours was.