I'm Still Waiting May Be You Call Me

Reads: 762  | Likes: 0  | Shelves: 0  | Comments: 4

Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

This poem, is based on real story , i took permission from my best friend Sundas Khan to write a poem on her relationship and here I go


I'm still waiting maybe you call me,

But I know you will never contact me again,

You thrown me from your heart like a tissue paper,

You don't even want to hear my voice,

Now I came to know you don't care,

And I accepted that as a sour truth,

Stay happy but still you are in my heart,

I’m still waiting maybe you call me,

Submitted: May 30, 2012

© Copyright 2023 Mahinu. All rights reserved.

Add Your Comments:



Kya usne hamara naam liya, kya usne Kabhi hamey yaad Kiya.......
Kya usne Kabhi poocha tujhse kis haal mei hai hum kaise hai............
Chahat desh se aane waale yeh to bata ke sanam kaise hai..................
Heatbreaking but a very lovely poem. Beauty of your poems is always apparent as you write them with a long hand.

Wed, May 30th, 2012 11:46am


Thank you so much vikrant heating comment...
I am really Thank full to you that you always like my poems :)

Wed, May 30th, 2012 6:36am


oh.. so sad.. what a sour truth.. dont worry friend..it'll be ok

Fri, June 1st, 2012 12:17pm


thank you smile valentine

Fri, June 1st, 2012 8:55am

Antoine Watson I

I can feel the sorrow through the poem. I can connect with this particular piece because im in a similar position. I also like how much emotion you put in such a short poem. Beautiful piece.

Tue, June 5th, 2012 5:38pm


Thank you so much.......

Wed, June 6th, 2012 12:59am

Facebook Comments

Other Content by Mahinu

Poem / Romance

Poem / Romance

Poem / Romance