Poem by: Maij
fall, leaves, autumn, haiku, seasonal
Submitted: October 31, 2011
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Beautiful way of describing what is happening right now. I found this piece to be quite eloquent, not only concerning the language, but the length as well. So much beauty in such a small space.
Thank you very much for your positive comments. I'm glad there are people here who appreciate haiku as much as I do :)
ha! who said i don't like haikus? this one was crisp!
Really happy you liked it! Thanks Bruce :)
Oh what more can I say!
Thanks very much Arun :) I really appreciate your comments!
I may not know what Haiku means but deep withing my being i sensed nature's freedom and found peace while reading this piece. Maybe this is my Haiku:)
Wow I'm glad you got such a great vibe from this poem. Haiku is a Japanese style of poetry which consists (traditionally) of three lines of 5-7-5 syllables. I love writing them because it’s such a beautiful art form that is so little but allows you to say so much! Thank you so much for reading! :)
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