Poem by: Maij
rain, dance, exotic, puddles
Submitted: November 07, 2011
© Copyright 2016 Maij. All rights reserved.
Oh dace is a fish! I didn't know haha. I googled and found it...
Flail of limbs FROM heaven - shouldn't it be 'from'?
I loved your description. Especially 'dance of chaos'! I guess, you, being in Florida, would've seen such calamities of severe rain? Well I too see it here at places...
But to return. Blood-drop! I can't imagine how you imagined it so! That was wonderful...
In total, this is a good writ, as usual; and forgive my poor critiquing skills...
Wow thanks for such (insightful) thoughtful comments Arun! I'm really lad you liked this poem :)
Very good. Beautiful interpretation. Simple things aren´t always good but the good things are always simple. G-man
Thanks so much for reading :)
Beautiful, just beautiful! Nature poems are my favourite type of poems, because they're so ... fresh. I loved how poetically you descriped the rain drops.
An exquisite writ, Martine! x
Thanks so much for reading Alice! I'm glad you liked this poem. Nature and love are my main themes and sources of inspiration for my writing. ?x
Woman, you're placing a huge strain on the amount of superlatives I can shower you with! Absolutely fantastic, yet again. I just love how your predominant themes seem to correlate, and how you also have definitely mastered them in terms of structure. You write about love and nature, yet every poem is so beautifully new and ambuscading - the theme stays relative, but the structure always arouses something new in the senses - your prose is marvelous.
Nik, your comments never cease to elate me :) Thank you so much for such kind and gracious comments. My writing does revolve around the themes of love and nature and its very uplifting to hear that my work continues to display originality :) Your comments are absolutely beautiful in every way. Thank you so much for reading??
I loved it hun!!
Thank you so much for reading :) I'm glad you liked this poem and I really appreciate your comments??
:D Thanks so much for reading!
I love the rain. Living in Phoenix I relish every drop. Great poem!
Me too :) Thanks so much for reading; I'm glad you liked it??
Melancholy invoking. Pure to the core.Hmmmmm:) why is the rain so important to you.
Hello Ekeuhie :) Thanks a lot for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment. I don't know why I write about the rain myself; I do know that I find it has a calming effect on me though; very soothing.
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