Dance of The Rain

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

Short poem describing my adoration of rain...


Submitted: November 07, 2011

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arun

Oh dace is a fish! I didn't know haha. I googled and found it...
Flail of limbs FROM heaven - shouldn't it be 'from'?
I loved your description. Especially 'dance of chaos'! I guess, you, being in Florida, would've seen such calamities of severe rain? Well I too see it here at places...
But to return. Blood-drop! I can't imagine how you imagined it so! That was wonderful...
In total, this is a good writ, as usual; and forgive my poor critiquing skills...
TC Martine...

Fri, November 11th, 2011 1:48pm

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Wow thanks for such (insightful) thoughtful comments Arun! I'm really lad you liked this poem :)

Fri, November 11th, 2011 5:44pm

sowosamma25

Very good. Beautiful interpretation. Simple things aren´t always good but the good things are always simple. G-man

Fri, November 11th, 2011 5:04pm

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Thanks so much for reading :)

Fri, November 11th, 2011 2:40pm

absolutelyalice

Beautiful, just beautiful! Nature poems are my favourite type of poems, because they're so ... fresh. I loved how poetically you descriped the rain drops.

An exquisite writ, Martine! x

Sat, November 12th, 2011 7:01pm

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Thanks so much for reading Alice! I'm glad you liked this poem. Nature and love are my main themes and sources of inspiration for my writing. ?x

Sun, November 13th, 2011 8:31am

Nik89

Woman, you're placing a huge strain on the amount of superlatives I can shower you with! Absolutely fantastic, yet again. I just love how your predominant themes seem to correlate, and how you also have definitely mastered them in terms of structure. You write about love and nature, yet every poem is so beautifully new and ambuscading - the theme stays relative, but the structure always arouses something new in the senses - your prose is marvelous.

Mon, November 14th, 2011 4:40pm

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Nik, your comments never cease to elate me :) Thank you so much for such kind and gracious comments. My writing does revolve around the themes of love and nature and its very uplifting to hear that my work continues to display originality :) Your comments are absolutely beautiful in every way. Thank you so much for reading??

Mon, November 14th, 2011 2:26pm

whiteroses

I loved it hun!!
soo beautiful!!

Mon, November 14th, 2011 9:58pm

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Thank you so much for reading :) I'm glad you liked this poem and I really appreciate your comments??

Mon, November 14th, 2011 2:55pm

Mike Stevens

Wow!

Wed, November 30th, 2011 7:09pm

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:D Thanks so much for reading!

Wed, November 30th, 2011 11:20am

bobthebuilder

I love the rain. Living in Phoenix I relish every drop. Great poem!

Thu, December 1st, 2011 5:10am

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Me too :) Thanks so much for reading; I'm glad you liked it??

Thu, December 1st, 2011 7:34am

Ekeuhie

Melancholy invoking. Pure to the core.Hmmmmm:) why is the rain so important to you.

Sat, December 10th, 2011 12:28am

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Hello Ekeuhie :) Thanks a lot for reading and leaving such a thoughtful comment. I don't know why I write about the rain myself; I do know that I find it has a calming effect on me though; very soothing.

Sun, December 11th, 2011 9:35am

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