Poem by: Maij
love, dark, poetry, pain, kiss
Submitted: April 09, 2011
© Copyright 2016 Maij. All rights reserved.
Very intense... I like this.
Thank you :)
i don't think i need roadmap to figure this one out. intersting mixture of pleasure and pain. hope it's all good for you instead of you having to accept the good with the bad. anyway, yummy good poem once again. i enjoy your choice of words and your mini metaphors. will be sending out some of mine soon! bruce.
Thanks alot!and yay! :)
Your loving; careful blows, continue - typos.
Crecendo - proper spelling: crescendo.
Cuducts? What's that?
Ooohh I'm a bad reader! A brainless reader :(
Can't get this also :(
Thanks for the tips; I'll take care of them right away :)Your not brainless or a bad reader, I'm just a terrible speller! The word 'Cuducts' is supposed to be 'conducts' To tell you honestly, this poem makes me cringe every time I read it so I guess that's why I never do any more.. I just might delete it, haha. It just seems so corny now :/
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