Lyric of Longing : Fulfilled (part two)

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The next phase of love encouterd by this longing lover..


Submitted: April 25, 2011

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brucek

silky smooth. lilting and delicate. loved it! hope to see more from you soon!

Thu, August 18th, 2011 3:10pm

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Thanks for your comments. I was wondering if you had been getting any of my comments? I started reading the script involving the chair (which is pretty entertaining already)but I havn't had a chance to finish. The past month has been a hectic one; but expect to hear from me soon :)

Thu, August 18th, 2011 10:21am

arun

'Petals of my lips', 'learn my features'... oooh hoo! awesome-blossom descriptions...
that must be sliver warmth, isn't it?
Sensation between pain and pleasure! A beautiful way to conclude a poem...
I like it.
Take care :)

Sat, November 5th, 2011 12:15pm

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:)!!! (That me smiling from ear to ear, lol) Thanks for your lovely and thoughtful comments. I truly appreciate your reading my work; I'm so happy you liked it; I'm 'bombilating' form head to toe with happiness, lol :)? Thank you, again.

Sat, November 5th, 2011 9:58am

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