Poem by: Maij
love, heart, flower, rose, nectar, unfurl
Submitted: November 13, 2011
© Copyright 2016 Maij. All rights reserved.
Very sweet and romantic and poetically writen.
Nice poem, I love it!
Thanks for sharing. Interestingly, my poem for the poetry competition has a similar ending. Check it out if you have time, it is called (to my poet)
Thanks so Much for your comments Fox :) I'll be sure to check it out as soon as I can??
Turned up the heat a notch with this one, didn't you? I sense some sensual connotations flowing through the words that literally cast me in hazy but gentle dream. Yet again, another poem of epic beauty and because the words you write and the pictures you paint in the reader's mind, it felt as though I were cast in a limitless world where your poetry played the hand of God and dictated all the splendour around me. Such raw complexity yet so invitingly warm. Bravo yet again, Martine.
I think my heart skipped a beat after reading this. In all honesty, this has to be the best comment I've ever received on my poetry! As you may have guessed, I have a strong inclination toward poems revolving around love and other romantically based themes. I'm absolutely ecstatic that you felt so strongly about this poem. The fact that you could see and experience what the poem portrayed is so gratifying? The beauty of your comment is overwhelming Nik. Thank you so very much??
that poem made me tear up!! Honestly for me to write a comment on ur poetry Id have to consult a thesaurus because im not very, shall we say, eloquent I guess, thats why I usually keep my comments short :P
you are a very talented writer and I am off to become a fan :D
Wow! Thank you so much for reading! This poem is one of the first (among others) that I've written since a 3 month period of no writing. I'm positively delighted that you liked this poem. I really do appreciate your comments. Thank you again, Whiteroses??
yum! no, my dear, you're not rusty. that tasted great. my, my, my, you are bursting for love. it's drenched on every line and all the way to your finger tips (to quote a poet) very well done. no one can touch you for sensual poetry. period.
Wow Bruce :) A thousand thank you's! This comment really means a lot considering how long youve been reading my work. I'm so happy you liked it??
** And the bit about no one being able to "touch you for sensual poetry" really was the icing on the cake :) Thanks so much!
it has a pretty feel to it. nice!
Lesley Annette 253
I really like your poems! i especially love your word choice and imegery!!! lol i find it...very tasteful lol i really like your work; this one in particular was wonderful :) i really liked it
Thanks Lesley :)
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