Poem by: Maij
love, poetry, impossible, yearning, phantom
Submitted: May 01, 2011
© Copyright 2016 Maij. All rights reserved.
This is indeed sad; trying to get something but before it is withing your reach, its gone.
Thank you or your comments and I'm so glad that you understood it :)
Short, but deep :) Shows how hard it can be at times to get what you want before it's gone. Sorry it's taken me so long to start reading! I've been so busy. Thank you for your patience
Thanks so much for your comments Faith and I appreciate your reading my work; it was just in time :)no worries?
But still afresh and uniquely written; 'fades'! that was shrewd how you expressed it.
Take care :)
Thanks so much Arun; I'm so happy you enjoyed reading this poem. This poem is dedicated to those who have yearned for something within reach only to realize that it is still so very far away.. Your comments were absolutely lovely; thank you again??
Depicts the complexity of this thing called love. Its as deep as the abyss and we just cant get enough especially if its true love. Such is the love of Christ when He gave up His life on the cross. Such is the love of God. Its greater far than tongue or pen can ever tell. It cant be deciphered or descripted by any rosetta stone.
Yet another fantastic spiritual allusion; beautiful! Thanks so very much for reading and extending such lovely thoughts :)
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