Poem by: Maij
love, romance, skin, kiss, touch, pleasure
Submitted: November 02, 2011
© Copyright 2016 Maij. All rights reserved.
Nice idea and well written, very poetic. Thanks for sharing!
Thank you vor your comments Foxglove :) Glad you liked it.
hmmmm. sounds like a dangerous fellow. to leave him to prowl like that. enjoy! (i liked it)
Lol thanks; I'm glad you liked! :)
P.S none of my poetry actually reflects personal accounts of my..er...life. At least not yet lol. Just thought I'd throw that out there because of the poems I'm planning to post soon, lol.
Very nice and descriptive.. Good work
Thank you :)
Mmmm this was very erotic but nicely penned and easy on the eye.No hanky panky here just lusty lines of pleasure written in a tasteful and seductive style.
Thank you very much Eileen :) Your warm comments are thoughtful and much appreciated?
oooh.. this was adult content haha. Just kidding.
'Pleasure point?' wow that was good!!!
Take care :)
Hi Arun, and thank you very much for such thoughtful comments. Yes, my work does tend to flirt with sensuality a bit, but I always try to keep it tasteful? Thank you again :)
Lesley Annette 253
A very PG way to describe this...discriptive scenario lol good work
Thanks Lesley :) I appreciate your comments?
Oh my God!!! This is just too hot. This is molten temptation spewing from the depths of raw pleasure and the throes of passion. Keep me focused, Lord. I must not loose my head. Maij, this was so terrific. Almost gave me a heart attack:)
Hey E :) Thanks a lot for reading and for the great comment! I’m really happy you liked it! I hope this poem didn't cause you any real harm; only the imagination of a hopeless romantic in action ^_^
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