Seduction melody

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

The possesive qualities of love.


Submitted: April 01, 2011

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DylanCLow

Loved it (:

Fri, April 1st, 2011 10:25pm

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Thank you. I'm glad you enjoy my wok :)

Sat, April 2nd, 2011 2:37am

arun

Heart's song. - hyphen missing.
Controls - one L.

awww I'm gobsmacked. I don't know what to say! This is your best writ - among that I've read so far now.
Outstanding imagination. Fantastic delineation. Enjoyable scene sequence, as like a short story. And awesome-blossom word choices. Super style. All positive! GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT GREAT... This is my favourite...
Sound like lead falling! Of pain so exquisite! A marauder of her soul! wowwie... you're a super poet...
Keep writing.
Kmu.
Take care sissy :-)

Sat, November 5th, 2011 11:13am

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Oh my! I'm positively elated that you liked this poem!Thank you so much for these lovely and thoughtful comments, Arun :) I'll be floating on this cloud of happiness all day???

Sat, November 5th, 2011 8:54am

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