Poem by: Maij
love, romance, poetry, fire, lust, heat, desier
Submitted: June 25, 2011
© Copyright 2016 Maij. All rights reserved.
marmalade! what word choice! great, but a few typos.
thanks bruce :)
Well done, worth better proof-reading :-)
I sure like it.
Thank you charly :)
I really liked this. However I was confused by "torrefy". Did you mean "torrify" or "terrify"?
Torrefy means to endure or experience intense heat. If you read any of the new poems I plan on posting soon, you will notice that I sometimes throw in strange but meaningful words. Thanks for reading!
Very emotional write. The simple things aren´t always good but the good things are always simple. G-man
Thanks alot for your comments; I'm glad you liked it :)
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