The Beauty of Us

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Romance  |  House: Booksie Classic

Too late to enter this into the contest it was intended for, but a love poem, none the less...


Submitted: November 25, 2011

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fresh spirits

I wish this poem a good luck even if it is not in the comp.Well written.You have just read Eternal Magic I guess;)

Fri, November 25th, 2011 7:59pm

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Thank you for reading :)

Fri, November 25th, 2011 2:26pm

brucek

totally awesome is what i think. lovely clarity, carefully crafted, easy and smooth. it would be hard to top it in the contest, i think. too bad you didn't make it. you're getting better each time i come over here. so there.

Sat, November 26th, 2011 2:10pm

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Thanks so much for reading Bruce :) I'm really glad you liked this poem. I do feel a little better about missing the deadline after reading your commnet. Thanks again for such a nice and thoughtful comment;you saying I've gotten better really is a great boost for me??

Sat, November 26th, 2011 3:33pm

bobthebuilder

Too bad you missed the contest, but this work stands alone as a great piece. Inspired and lovely! I think I will come back for more!

Sat, November 26th, 2011 2:32pm

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Thanks so much for reading Bob, I'm really glad you liked this poem. I do hope you come and read more of my work when you have the chance :)

Sat, November 26th, 2011 3:35pm

Nik89

Marry me? Haha, that's what my instinct was after reading this poem. Hallujah, your poems are so bright, so sweet and seductive I could eat them. Okay, bare with this digression for a moment - when I was playing Uncharted 3, I actually wanted to jump into that world because the graphics were the best I've ever seen on a console - they were just so crisp, clean, colourful and incredibly detailed and immaculate. And this is how I felt when I read this poem (heck, when I read ALL of your poems). I just how subtle but yet profoundly powerful your sentences are. Majestic without being imposing.

A wonderful work of art. You're just an incredible poet. You leave me speechless at times.

Sat, November 26th, 2011 8:30pm

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Haha, wow that's a new one on me :) Thanks so much for reading! I'm really glad you could visualize the imagery and phases of this poem. It really makes me happy when my poems make the reader 'feel'. Thanks again for leaving such a kind an thoughtful comment, I really do appreciate it??

Sat, November 26th, 2011 4:21pm

nid

I liked it..this is very good..

Thu, December 1st, 2011 4:37am

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Thanks for reading :)

Thu, December 1st, 2011 7:33am

arun

our love is poetry in motion - wow I love that...
Oh a really sweet poem...
All the best Marty.
TC :)

Sat, December 3rd, 2011 4:29pm

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Hey Arun Thanks so much for reading and leaving such a kind comment; I'm happy you liked this poem :)

Sat, December 3rd, 2011 3:02pm

glitter snow426

oh wow, so warm, beautiful indeed!!Sad it wasn't in the contest, truly a winner! I wrote, Always Roses, Always Music, I didn't win but it was so much fun. GREAT WORK, THE FIVE WORDS SHOW UP WONDERFULLY, PASSIONATELY!

Mon, December 26th, 2011 1:49pm

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Hello! :) Thanks so much for reading! Yes, I'm sad I didn't meet the deadline either but I'm glad I wrote this. thank you again for the lovely comments! I'm so happy you liked this :)

Wed, December 28th, 2011 8:57am

hasu

so beautiful girl. i really wish i could care about someone like your words care about people!! ahh it just gives me the warm fuzzies, and a feeeling that even though i may not feel like this about anyone now that there's hope that i'll find someone who makes me think like this poem..did that make sense?? hehe~ :)

Sun, January 1st, 2012 5:02pm

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Anna :) Thanks so much for fulfilling my request; I'm so glad you liked this poem! And I understand completely what you mean, I write works like these in order to entertain and bring warmth to the hearts and minds of my readers. I feel like everyone should have at least one opportunity to feel even a smidge of what love is like and I always aim to emit those warm, fuzzy waves you seemed to get from this! Thanks again for the lovely comments girl??

Thu, January 5th, 2012 7:10pm

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