Poem by: Maij
love, death, depression, alone, lonely, loneliness, darkness, winter, season, widow
Submitted: March 23, 2012
© Copyright 2016 Maij. All rights reserved.
OH MY GOODNESS!!!! You wanna know what I really think about this poem? Well this is it: A Masterpiece of Melancholic poetry. You wrote straight from your soul and every line flowed with emotion and passion. This poem is sure to melt the reader's heart and evoke feelings of grâce. Echoes of à broken and lonely soul.
Wow Ekeuhie, thank you so much for reading and leaving such a great comment! I always get so excited when a reader understands the emotional meaning behind my writing so thoroughly and you have done so perfectly. Every thing you felt in this poem, I felt too after reading the haiku that inspired me to write this. Thanks again for extending your honest opinion, i really appreciate it! ^_^
It was just fantastic, Maij! You made me weep :'(
I can actually figure out the pain...Hey, why am I always out of words when I try to explain how BEAUTIFUL you write? Sheesh!
If only you could feel what I do right now, you'll understand that words never do justice to sheer elegance! AWESOMANIA! I was really broken with the last lines... it was so very (hahaha!) enchanting.
ROCK 'N' ROLLA!!!
Your friend, always,
Awww! Thanks so much for reading Willie :) Your comments always seem to make me smile! I'm so happy you liked this poem and that you identified with the emotional connotations so beautifully. To me making the reader feel what I feel or what my characters feel is what writing is all about! Thank you again; so very much! ^_^
LIKEY LIKEY LIKEY FROM MY SIDE!!!!
Thank you!! ^_^
Just as top notch as always! You can always feel what you're writing. You can see it too. I love reading all the stuff you write.
Thanks a bunch for reading Larry! You flatter me far to much; I feel accomplished knowing that my writing made you feel. For me, connection and resonance is what its all about :)
oh so sad, empty and ccooooold too!! you did simply awesome here, surely felt the lonely darkness and miserable feeling, like heartbreaking, AMAZING STUFF, BE PROUD! love it love it
Thank you so much Vincy; I'm glad you enjoyed the read :)
where was this hiding? silent, dark and echoing. deep despair. spring will come, but never again for her. how incredibly sad.
This has been in the works for a while but I finally finished it the other day. Thanks so much for reading Bruce :)
Very pretty, and very sad. Your work always carries a lot of depth and leaves(pun?)the reader feeling that they had just taken part in a profound experience. Keep this up and one day soon you'll be a well-respected and very much admired poet.
Thanks a lot for reading (lol @ the pun) and leaving such a thoughtful comment Gideon. I really appreciate it :)& Thanks for the encouragement too.
You, ma'am, are such a wonderful poet. I could spend all night reading you. You open your soul for us all to see, and that is just oh-so beautiful. You are such a breath of fresh air. Keep on writing, sweets, keep on writing.
Thanks so much for taking the time out to read my work :) I'm really glad you enjoyed this poem!
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