Poem by: Malaxter
man, chase, funny, flee, north carolina, lymeric
Submitted: March 09, 2013
There once was a man named Fajina
He was said to have a vagina
The villagers did chase him
To rip him limb from limb
So he fled to North Carolina
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Please tell me what you have to say about my first (and probable last) lymeric.
lol. I'm using this at the bar.
Thanks. Be sure to drink a beer for me when you do!
I think you should keep writing limericks :). This one is good but you 3rd and 4th lines had kind of a choppy rhythm. Once you read a few classic limericks you'll get the hang of it. And try versing it aloud as well so you can find the rythm. It makes for much wittier writes and it will also help your poems in general flow better. I like it though :)
I noticed the rythm. I am giving up limeicks because I found it difficult. And would The Man From Nantucket and A Lady Named Jill count?
This was hilarious! I'd like to order some chicken faginas, please. Heavy on the hot sause. Enjoyable.
Personally, I prefer the sweet 'n' sour.
I have very little knowledge about lymerics... It is good, with the ends rhyming.
I got a good laugh out of this one. I liked it.
Good. I am happy this made somebody laugh.
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