I am lost
In a world far from fine
I am lost
In a world that's mine
Where do I go
What do I do
What is the next step
And with who
I can't go back
But fear the path ahead
Sometimes I think
It would be simpler
if only I was dead
Submitted: March 06, 2013
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Conveys remorse and longing very well. Quite lovely. To a tee. You certainly are talented.
Tue, March 12th, 2013 10:11pm
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Why thank you. and so are you, if I may say so.
Tue, March 12th, 2013 3:13pm
I thought this was brilliant. I have moments where I can relate to this completely.
Fri, May 3rd, 2013 8:30am
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Thank you for the compliment.
Fri, May 3rd, 2013 10:00am
brilliant and really emotional. nice work
Wed, May 8th, 2013 7:55pm
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Thanks.
Wed, May 8th, 2013 3:52pm
good one.
the description is apt
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I hope to do better than just apt. I thank you for your honest opinion.
Fri, May 24th, 2013 10:47am
Simple but extremely powerful poem! This is something that I can relate to, and I love that in poetry. (:
-Brianna
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I am glad to hear it.
Fri, June 21st, 2013 1:45pm
Wow. That was an intense read! I really liked it!
Sat, June 29th, 2013 12:36pm
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Glad to hear it.
Tue, July 2nd, 2013 12:09pm
I know I've been stuck here before in my life. Worrying and wondering if the next decision I make is going to be the right one. Nicely written......! :)
Wed, July 31st, 2013 12:12pm
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Thanks.
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Goodness, I feel like the more I read from you, the more I love your work!
Sat, March 9th, 2013 8:54pmIt had this very strong emotion to it that I felt in the last line. Very powerful!
Gets a like from me :)
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It was definately full of emotion. And thanks.
Tue, March 12th, 2013 10:43am