When You Need Me Most

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Status: Finished  |  Genre: Poetry  |  House: Booksie Classic

A poem I wrote for my best friend.

No matter how far

No matter how close

I’ll always be there for you

When you need me most

 

Whether driving your car

Or flying in a plane

I’ll stay right beside you

To protect you from pain

 

If you ever give up

And feel you’re gonna fall

Just give out a shout

I will run to your call

 

You are my best friend

And I am yours

When I am with you

My soul simply soars

 

No matter how close

No matter how far

I will be there for you

Wherever you are

 

No matter how far

No matter how close

I’ll always be there for you

When you need me most


Submitted: March 12, 2013

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Km2

Wow! This might be my favorite light one of yours. This one is stunningly beautiful. So full of passion it's almost busting at the seams. Healtfelt without being gushy.

Thu, March 14th, 2013 4:26pm

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Thank you. I am happy you like it.

Thu, April 25th, 2013 3:40pm

Tatia22

Your friend must be very important to you. This was a very sweet poem. I appreciate such love and care in a friendship. Gave it a like!

Fri, April 26th, 2013 10:20pm

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Thank you. Your right, Melissa was, and is still, very important to me.

Tue, April 30th, 2013 10:28am

Ian Dawn

loved it great flow and rhyme and teh story flowed thru nicely. Great job

Wed, May 1st, 2013 11:50pm

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Thank you Ian Dawn.

Thu, May 2nd, 2013 12:00pm

Sierra Virgie

Awww, it's very simple but sweet. I love it. :)

Sat, May 4th, 2013 6:34am

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Thank you.

Tue, May 7th, 2013 3:00pm

lost love long forgotten

Great poem I wish I'd had a friend like you. The few poems I've read by you are very well flowed and so beautiful I like your writing style it's really great.

Sat, May 4th, 2013 5:58pm

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Thank you. I hope I do not dissapoint.

Tue, May 7th, 2013 2:58pm

Criss Sole

This was a great poem. It was so heartfelt and sweet it was a joy to read.

And thank you for your comment on my work. I am so happy you're still reading.

Thu, May 9th, 2013 6:08am

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Of course, and thank you for continuing to read my work.

Thu, May 9th, 2013 2:35pm

Maria Linda

Friends indeed makes life worthwhile.

Nice tribute to your friend.
Simply sincere and heartwarming writing.

Your friend should be proud to have you, a talented and soon to be famous writer:-)

Fri, May 10th, 2013 7:11am

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Thanks. And yes, friends make life worthwhile.

Fri, May 10th, 2013 12:44pm

Zee Zee

i love reading ur poems they always sound good. nice job :)

Sun, May 12th, 2013 9:31pm

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Thank you Ryan.

Tue, May 14th, 2013 1:23pm

The elder poet

I liked it. I always write in rhymes. It's the only way I know.It's great for you to be there for her. I only hope she would be there for you too. You never know. She might feel the same way about you.

Mon, May 13th, 2013 6:58pm

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Perhaps, but I fear that I will never know one way or the other.

Tue, May 14th, 2013 1:25pm

Sgroi123

Nicely crafted. Flows really well.

Wed, May 22nd, 2013 10:51am

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Thanks. I can't take all the credit though. Nickelback inspired me.

Wed, May 22nd, 2013 10:31am

Cyndi Goodgame

Sweet poem. Poetic friends are the best. I always know how they really feel. (assuming I'm receptive) Sometimes my poetic friends try to tell me things in code by way of poetry.

You have to get really good at reading between the lines. LOL

Sun, May 26th, 2013 8:49pm

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That sounds like a great way to pass notes in school.

Tue, May 28th, 2013 12:13pm

Smilyface3364

Your friend is lucky to have you. That is very deep and moving. Pure talent.

Thu, May 30th, 2013 8:12pm

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Thank you. This comment made me smile.

Thu, May 30th, 2013 1:13pm

Angie Blake

This is a beautiful poem. I love the way it just flows. So well put together. You did a great job! :)

Wed, July 31st, 2013 12:11pm

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Thanks.

Wed, July 31st, 2013 11:39am

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